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emma-langley
emma-langley
American I am 12 years old and am currently in the 7th grade. I am still developing as a writer and am looking for feed back on what i write.
There were four noticeable things, maybe that's why I picked him out of more than two hundred people he was it, the one I though was oh how to put it, cute I suppose His lip piercing screamed I'm a rebel His brow piercing shouted I'm different From the red, black, green, and yellow head phones to his Purple Adidas high-tops He looks well, you could call them average but those piercings made him so much more they said notice me I'm different! His headphones said I listen to hours and hours of music But most of all, the thing that was the most amazing were those purple Adidas high-tops His head moving with the beat said, Wanna listen to? Those chocolate brown eye whispered I can listen The hands constantly fidgeting spoke, I'm never boring His fingers flying over the keys of his phone typed, I'm connected! But those shoes I'll never forget Those purple Adidas high-tops
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Apr 7, 2014
Apr 7, 2014 at 1:16 PM UTC
Purple Adidas
It drips down from the sky, cold wet gloomy The little birds flit about, searching for the now soggy bird feed In a pitiful attempt to stay warm their feathers fluffed out, trying to keep the wind cold biting harsh out of their petite bodies Their tiny clawed feet scratch miserably in the mud searching seeking begging that one small worm to dance up from the earth soft damp rich So the small bird can go home to his tiny family small wet miserable with some sort of token to show he cares
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Apr 7, 2014
Apr 7, 2014 at 1:09 PM UTC
Rain
Jumping is scary, exhilerating, and fun, untill you fall, shooting twards the ground, you scream, and close your eyes, waiting for the pain it should be sxrushaiting as you hit the cold hard ground, you should be burning, you should be crying. but you're not. becasue I cought you, I told you that when you jumped, I would be there to catch you. I told you that when you jumped, I would be there to catch you, I would save you, from the pain of falling. You didn't believe me, But now you do. You know, that I will never hurt you, never make you cry, and always catch you when you fall.
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Jan 3, 2013
Jan 3, 2013 at 2:55 PM UTC
Jumping
You've gotten lost, wandered away from the path and never returned I miss you, the way you would wrap your arms around me, and I would feel safe, safer than I ever have. But, Something happened, something irreversible, try as I did I could not keep her away. She pulled off course, and you didn't realize it until, it was to late, she had you trapped, So deep in the forest of her lies that you could not escape. You screamed and cried for help, but no one could hear you. I want you back, please help me find you.
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Jan 3, 2013
Jan 3, 2013 at 2:49 PM UTC
Missing
I love you, For everything, Everything that you did, Have done, And will do for me. I love you for you, your personality, So happy and bubbly, yet sad and gloomy, Both balancing the other out, but bother are needed, in order to mate the perfect person, A person without flaw, At least to me. But you don't l;ove me, You love her, I have told you that I loved you, But that couldn't change your mind, I love her too, Yet hate her at the same time, For hurting you, And by extension she hurt me. But I will forgive her, Because you have, and I love you.
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Dec 21, 2012
Dec 21, 2012 at 3:57 PM UTC
I Love You
Why did you leave me? I lvoed you so much, ANd tried so hard, To get you to stay. But you didn't want me anymore I was just a toy for you to play with. I'm sure you had a lot of fun, Trying to figure out how to break me. I thought, I thought that you loved me, I guess that acting is one of you strong points. But why? Why did you do this to me? You shattered me into a million tiny pieces. And what could you possibly gain? ************************************************* Why? Why were you so ignorant? It was so easy to lure you into my waiting grasp, All it took was some sweet talk, and pretending, Maybe I loved you for a little bit, Or maybe I have gotten so good at faking that I fooled my self. In the end it was fun to break your heart. Now do you know why?
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Dec 21, 2012
Dec 21, 2012 at 3:53 PM UTC
Why?
I tried, So hard To make it work. I tried so hard because I hoped, I hoped that you still loved me. But you didn't No matter what I did, No matter how much I changed my self, You couldn't love me any more. It broke my heart when you left me, And you know you did it Though, You never tried to fix it, Just left me there like a broken doll No one wanted to love. ************************************** He tried way to hard, Couldn't he see, I didn't love him anymore? It was almost ridicules, How much he tried to change. It almost made me feel bad when I broke it off, Almost. Now when I see you, I think of how you look, And act, And sound. You sound broken, Like I was all you had to live for, And you will never be happy with out me. Well I have news for you, There are plenty of fish in the sea, Go catch one
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Dec 19, 2012
Dec 19, 2012 at 1:30 PM UTC
Tried
What are in the presents under the tree? Boxes are covered in smooth satiny wrapping paper A puzzle full of colours, solid and stiff, waiting to be pressed together by little hands A doll that can walk and talk, in a frilly dress like a princess, eager to be posed and played with A shiny new car making noises when it is bumped patiently waiting to be pushed across the floor New dresses, ironed and ready for wearing, sewn to perfection Socks, waiting to be recieved with a fake smile and 'thank you', that are later found to be warm and soft Shiney new leather shoes, that are not so soft, Accesories covered in sparkles, that rub off as the small package is opened A new book, waiting for someone to crack its spine open and start to read
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Dec 13, 2012
Dec 13, 2012 at 5:49 PM UTC
Present
You You made me feel what it is like, to be hurt, to be hurt so bad, I thought that I was going to die, You made me feel like I had been stabbed, I felt like I had been stabbed in the stomach Where you knew that there would be no hope, no hope for recovery, or for life. And you enjoyed it Enjoyed my pain, and my suffering You made me feel what it was like to long, to long for peace, to long to see any one but you, yet long to see you everyday at the same time. You made me feel what it was like to need, to need to get away from you, but also need to be with you. You were like the sun, warm and pleasent, yet cold and out of reach, I needed you to go on, but you shined in my eyes blinding me, blinding me to you motive, to break my heart, I was your icicle, you melted me little my little in the beggining, but then made me freeze up. You were the bull, and I was your matador I evaded you for a while, and then tired, letting my guard down and you hit me, you hit me so har I flew backwards hitting the fans in the grand stands. I was dazed for a while, and then got angery, I took revenge on you, but you won again, I was hurt, and always will be.
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Dec 13, 2012
Dec 13, 2012 at 5:39 PM UTC
Hurt
I left months ago, got over you quickly, and moved on, got with a group of friends, While you were still wallowing in your own sadness I spend the mornings wandering the halls with my friends sometimes we cross paths, but I don't want to look at you. I found out that you were doing things behind my back, without my permission, and I confronted you, You lied to me, saying that you didn't do it I know that you did. Your tried to get me to take you back, but I am through with you. You left me months ago, Leaving me behind in the dust, I couldn't get over you, try as I did. I found no comfort in my friends, the same group that you hung out with, and became a recluse. Wandering the halls, not having any particular path occasionally we crossed paths, but you would never meet my gaze. You accused me, and I lied and said I didn't do them, but I know I did. I know I am to blame, I said that I was sorry, but you wouldn't take me back. You said that you were done, With me, with boys.
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Dec 13, 2012
Dec 13, 2012 at 5:10 PM UTC
Left