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courtsrandompoetry
courtsrandompoetry
18/F/United Kingdom only a beginner so i would really like feedback
not a spec of candour lives on my skin forced to abandon the truth so this serpent can protect me from sin you can call me a blue jay nature's most gifted liars but if there cannon nets catch me shot in the head by men in army attire life is a game of Russian roulette i spin the cylinder and await what's next My chances are ungenerous but I already knew that's the tragedy of a 1938 Jew
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Mar 10, 2021
Mar 10, 2021 at 6:47 PM UTC
1938 Jew
This terminal disease attacks and bombards until my brittle mental state is now in shards Like a virus it spreads to the depths of my emotions so the doors of my vulnerability is now open At stage 4 my surface is decomposing after all it's efforts I've now become nothing
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Mar 10, 2021
Mar 10, 2021 at 6:45 PM UTC
Disease
"i can fly" she cried with joy as her wings soared through the sky but this was a dream she looked amongst the trees in awe of the birds who danced through the suns beam "i can fly" she cried with joy as her wings soared through the sky but this wasn't a dream she looked down to the trees making her way to the suns beam
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Mar 10, 2021
Mar 10, 2021 at 9:59 AM UTC
fly
our youthful wit so cerebral guards our consciousness like a sacred cathedral
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Mar 10, 2021
Mar 10, 2021 at 9:38 AM UTC
The mind
i wrote your name in silver but the ink came out red yet this made me happy as his favourite colour was red
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Mar 10, 2021
Mar 10, 2021 at 9:20 AM UTC
Red
when my volcano erupts you will ignite ashes to ashes cremated on sighted when my glacier melts you will drown plunge to the depths of my ocean 36,000 feet down
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Mar 10, 2021
Mar 10, 2021 at 9:06 AM UTC
revenge of mother nature
my night is unlighted tho painted with a celestial body in a blanket of colossal lights your absence i embody once a perfect jewel where you beamed with brilliance night was a paradise in heaven blinded by your radiance but your light expanded until it ruptured like dynamite night is now a shadowed hell without you there's no stars in sight
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Mar 10, 2021
Mar 10, 2021 at 8:57 AM UTC
absence
our antique soul so veracious cages our dreams and hidden secrets our soul's a relic our incarnation holds all memories back to when our mother tongue was Thracian our soul has hyperthymesia mind of an elephant   writes our life in lyrics to a string of an instrument
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Mar 9, 2021
Mar 9, 2021 at 11:16 AM UTC
anima mea