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alexander-martyr
I know little of rhyme Nothing of meter My writings, barbaric Don't express either Part of poetry As well as another Someone more well-versed In giving poems color I use alliteration on occasion Pauses to be dramatic These little lacking lines I craft Probably come off as erratic Syllables be ****** Imagery imagined Rhymes forced One of the only poems I know Is about a hearse One that ominously rides by Intimidating some unfortunate guy Reminding him that he'll eventually die Or those under the pen of Poe Whose tales of distortion and woe Are firmly engraved in my memory As empty as blank verse I sit here vexed and cursed Trying to express my thoughts My more artistic passion Which just so happens To be in a more archaic fashion Than the others I admire and read But I've never taken the time To put poetry under a microscope to see The framework that could lead the blind Guiding and inspiring those who write poetry And so I'm inclined, but don't really mind Remaining forever in obscurity
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Jan 21, 2014
Jan 21, 2014 at 4:57 AM UTC
Misguided Rant, Misled Heart
What eyes do you look at me with? I could never tell because your vision is always turned away from me Even when you're staring directly, your eyes are never focused As if your eyes—your heart—is affixed to something else If I weren't here, surely you'd feel more lonely But would it be more lonesome to your heart or your eyes? Do I mean something to you, or am I just something to look at? Something to appease your boredom and apathy? Something to have so you won't be left with nothing? Is there something behind me? I'd love to look, to find out what captivates you But these stakes impaling my legs to the chair are too weighted for me to pull For now I'll just remain and stare Gaze at you and lose my mind in the dense atmosphere I wish we could be lost here forever Wouldn't eternal nothingness be something nice? I always thought it would be, at least with you But you were never looking at me in the first place
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Jan 21, 2014
Jan 21, 2014 at 4:01 AM UTC
Clouded Eyes