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in the garden of Eden sundial, of stone and bronze, wasting, weathered green, measurer of time in years; doomed to erode; and YET, the iris comes but for days, yet it comes always, perpetual...
Love is a good thing when frosted coated with passionate kisses. Without them kisses, it’s like kissing your parents on the lips; meaningful but not pleasurable
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Oct 10, 2020
Oct 10, 2020 at 12:44 PM UTC
my entry for the (worst) Poem of the Day
Subtle ~for Sally~ there is no escaping it. to write of subtle, one must be blunt, forthright, direct, write with no subtlety. there is no way, impossible, to capture the fine single threads required to weave a tapestry of bold and delicate intertwined, of depth and surface, of a droplet of water shining outstanding in a sea of harsh blather. there is bold, there is pale. they can coexist, perhaps even heighten each other. but subtle is a delicacy, a single thread, a standard rarely achieved. which is why this poem makes no pretense at subtlety. Aug 21~22 2020
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Aug 22, 2020
Aug 22, 2020 at 7:48 AM UTC
subtle
هر دو بی فرزند هستیم (متفاوت)/we are both childless, differently —————————————————————————— *let us not ask each other or god the why, just how life worked out and maybe by a choice unconfessed* ~ yet we both lie. ~ you possess thousands of offspring, tend to their every need, breast feed them water, special nutrients, stroking their leaves, worry about their viruses, you, dying just, a little, when, one rooted looks up and says, “I am dying mother, thank you for your love.” ~ my ***** produced two men, each now, differentially, lost, lost to me, and daily privately, in word and wet, weep my losses, for what is a man who had children, but goes down into his grave gray haired, with none in attendance to refill the soil that his grave grayed body requires to hide his wasted, childless life.
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Jul 25, 2020
Jul 25, 2020 at 8:52 AM UTC
هر دو بی فرزند هستیم (متفاوت)/we are both childless (differently)
Love: “and I know not if I sink or swim” Love: here’s how I see it; everybody should have the ability to walk around with two sign optionality: 1. No vacancy 2. Open: (all rooms have A/C & cable) never be disappointed; you know what you’re getting up front and for an extra fee 3. credit cards Not Accepted
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Jun 21, 2020
Jun 21, 2020 at 5:27 PM UTC
Love: “and I know not if I sink or swim”
six trees gathered, a single stand, looking for a gathering, standing of four more, a prayer circle to make, branch to branch holding onto each other, to have their bark better heard, the question on the table, today’s agenda: why must trees die? overheard their human querying same, the proud trees too, puzzled, sending their inquiry to the heavens that feed them never failing, water to quench a rooted deep thirst, their role, job description well understood, purposed to shade the world, give off fruit, so tasked, so asked: why must trees die? Caught the busy Lord unawares, dealing with seasonal pandemics, endemic hatred from the frailings of  human weakness, who honor pretense by their mouth moving, but don’t believe their enunciation, oh! tiresome battlefront, millions of casualties inflicted on each other, Lord could not countenance another self-interested questioning of his earthly architecture why must trees die? on a beautiful paradisal day, cumulus whites decorating a blue coloratura that never be quite replicated, quieting, five-sense waters at ease, minimal moving, lunching noon hour,the birds, insects, rabbits all retired to cooling reservoirs, munch, gnaw, pollinate, yet the trees misjudge the sun dial iris quietude in the manger, the grove, as the Lord’s good graceful forgiving demeanor, therefore shocking, disbelieving the unforgiving ruthlessness of a deity of love, so the cracking of a single bolt of punishing, purposed lighting, that knocked all the trees down, single blow, roots embruing, ember glowed, a “sounding” the world hears unoften, unremitting, not understanding its other-worldliness, so rare appearing when an actualized answer is returned, declarative, tangible, glorious words: because I am who I am, The Eternal, alone, who keeps the imperfect balance of all my creations, without oversight, asking only from them acceptance of things beyond earthly comprehension...
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Jun 6, 2020
Jun 6, 2020 at 8:20 AM UTC
why must trees die?
six trees gathered, a single stand, looking for a gathering, standing of four more, a prayer circle to make, branch to branch holding onto each other, to have their bark better heard, the question on the table, today’s agenda: why must trees die? overheard their human querying same, the proud trees too, puzzled, sending their inquiry to the heavens that feed them never failing, water to quench a rooted deep thirst, their role, job description well understood, purposed to shade the world, give off fruit, so tasked, so asked: why must trees die? Caught the busy Lord unawares, dealing with seasonal pandemics, endemic hatred from the frailings of  human weakness, who honor pretense by their mouth moving, but don’t believe their enunciation, oh! tiresome battlefront, millions of casualties inflicted on each other, Lord could not countenance another self-interested questioning of his earthly architecture why must trees die? on a beautiful paradisal day, cumulus whites decorating a blue coloratura that never be quite replicated, quieting, five-sense waters at ease, minimal moving, lunching noon hour,the birds, insects, rabbits all retired to cooling reservoirs, munch, gnaw, pollinate, yet the trees misjudge the sun dial iris quietude in the manger, the grove, as the Lord’s good graceful forgiving demeanor, therefore shocking, disbelieving the unforgiving ruthlessness of a deity of love, so the cracking of a single bolt of punishing, purposed lighting, that knocked all the trees down, single blow, roots embruing, ember glowed, a “sounding” the world hears unoften, unremitting, not understanding its other-worldliness, so rare appearing when an actualized answer is returned, declarative, tangible, glorious words: because I am who I am, The Eternal, alone, who keeps the imperfect balance of all my creations, without oversight, asking only from them acceptance of things beyond earthly comprehension...
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what is the what, this simplicity, the great difference?                                                   ~~<>~~ he reads certain words,^ then the poet uncovered, stumbles upon, a rhythmic bearing, provoked, his own bearing now  lost in contemplation, exits the cottage, wandering on the always wet grass, observed by animal menagerie, espy him watchfully, a human directionless wanderer wondering, asking himself the meaning of it all, knowing answers reserved not him we celebrate subtlety, process the minutiae of extracting an exactitude of  the precious précis of each momentary why, only when he honest confesses his ineptitude, can he truly begin to pluck words from the airy atmosphere to assemble them in format that mines the great difference in everything, the differential veins the creatures, unshy, wish to contribute, suggesting editions, subtractions, this turn, this twist, this nuance, always clarifying, valuing utility beauteous, making the meaning perfectly clear in ways that make you gasp at words, their powerful, to define, then refine, then just plain be, be fine, finding, exploiting, drawing freehand the lines of distinction exacting*** this great differences                                                   ~~<>~~ ^ “and next to nothing is everything, all worth knowing, you, write my poetry, as I write of you with breathless ease and comfort, for the thoughts of all men in all ages and lands, are original to where our eyes espy each other, where our lips kiss to cross, cross to kiss, what is the what, this simplicity, the great differences?”
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Jun 6, 2020
Jun 6, 2020 at 12:28 AM UTC
what is the what, this simplicity, this great difference?
what is the what, this simplicity, the great difference?                                                   ~~<>~~ he reads certain words,^ then the poet uncovered, stumbles upon, a rhythmic bearing, provoked, his own bearing now  lost in contemplation, exits the cottage, wandering on the always wet grass, observed by animal menagerie, espy him watchfully, a human directionless wanderer wondering, asking himself the meaning of it all, knowing answers reserved not him we celebrate subtlety, process the minutiae of extracting an exactitude of  the precious précis of each momentary why, only when he honest confesses his ineptitude, can he truly begin to pluck words from the airy atmosphere to assemble them in format that mines the great difference in everything, the differential veins the creatures, unshy, wish to contribute, suggesting editions, subtractions, this turn, this twist, this nuance, always clarifying, valuing utility beauteous, making the meaning perfectly clear in ways that make you gasp at words, their powerful, to define, then refine, then just plain be, be fine, finding, exploiting, drawing freehand the lines of distinction exacting*** this great differences                                                   ~~<>~~ ^ “and next to nothing is everything, all worth knowing, you, write my poetry, as I write of you with breathless ease and comfort, for the thoughts of all men in all ages and lands, are original to where our eyes espy each other, where our lips kiss to cross, cross to kiss, what is the what, this simplicity, the great differences?”
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