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Mak0714
F Just pour my heart and soul onto the page. Hoping for some feedback on my writing
I got a secret It's difficult to keep I just want to shout it out to the world And suffer the consequences This secret is slowly decaying me Like a broken heart, after a crucial break I just want to shout it out to the world I got a secret I don't know if I can keep it I'm barely holding it in, like Attempting to hold water in your hands It's there but slowly aching to slip out between your fingers I got a secret And I want to shout it out to the world
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Apr 5, 2018
Apr 5, 2018 at 10:45 PM UTC
Gotta Keep It
Anger Its ******* horrible One moment, all is good then the next its a whip-lash of yelling, screaming, complete chaos You have to walk on egg shells Try not to create the mayhem and a disasterous situation One small grain of sand and it's triggered Shots fired and your gone.....
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Apr 5, 2018
Apr 5, 2018 at 10:43 PM UTC
What's it's Like
I'm holding onto a rough rope As I'm pulling and pulling my hands begin to burn and bleed I don't want to let go, I can't let go But what will happen when I do let go Will my hands heal Is it better to let go? Will everything automatically be okay? I think not The cuts and burns left scars And it won't go away Because I just can't let go of that rope Its barely keeping my life together I hate it, but I love it... that rope...
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Dec 3, 2017
Dec 3, 2017 at 11:04 PM UTC
The Rope
It's a complicated subject slash rule of society It separates us all Labels cause bulling and fights Automatic outcast, is what you become if your a label that someone dislikes or disagrees to Gay, lesbian, transgender, **** ****** crazy, fat, and **** are just a few Why does society have the up most desire to place a label on an innocent person The only label that we should put upon a person is HUMAN Race, sexuality, socioeconomic status or geography origins does not define who we are as a person We are who we want to be Not what society thinks we have to be We all are just HUMANS
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Nov 26, 2017
Nov 26, 2017 at 11:40 PM UTC
We're not your labels
Looking back at all the growing up I have done Yet, looking ahead at the rest that I have to do It's scary It's like an emotional rollercoaster Excited to become more and more independent But, then looking at how difficult that can be Alone out in the real world Back then I can fly like a bird Not have to care about a thing in the world But now everything is Like a shrinking room, Closing in all around me Oh the memories
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Nov 26, 2017
Nov 26, 2017 at 11:36 PM UTC
Random Thoughts
I'm not ok. Yes, I smile and give rays of hope, but that's just an act. Everyone thinks I'm ok, But i am really screaming inside for someone to notice me. I'm not ok. I know I have friends But they seem fake and faded I have a boyfriend But he seems to not care I'm honestly not ok. I go home, sit down and just cry exhausted, and stressed my life is just a mess I'm not ok Yes I smile, but a smile can also be many problems Physically, mentally, emotionally... I'm not okk...
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Nov 2, 2017
Nov 2, 2017 at 11:01 PM UTC
I'm not ok.