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Magnanimous-and-anonymous
Hoping for professional advice or constructive criticism.
treacherous fiends feed us deceit behind a screen showing us violence and things most obscene it would seem we're all on the same team but believe me its best to not feed greed and make it gluttonous by keeping it in front of us it is necessary that you do not trust the high tide of lies that ties the media to your eyes.
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Sep 17, 2016
Sep 17, 2016 at 3:57 PM UTC
They wont tell you this on the news
What thought could have wrought all this despair? Yielding aught; toxifying the air suffocating adolescents, atop their chairs. Now they feel time intertwining with their fears, and I feel their tears sear into my mind So now I hope to find; a way to make all of their burdens mine.
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Sep 14, 2016
Sep 14, 2016 at 8:36 PM UTC
Atlas
Lie with me I dont want to see you shiver or shake No i dont think leaving was a mistake. Yes ill stay even when the earth quakes. Nothing could ever break My resolve. Ill only be me while youre involved. Yes ill be back Even if i have to crawl Through the deepest sea Or the shallowest grave. No im not saying id die Please dont cry Its far from over Even though its gone under. I still wonder Where you are when i awake Why things aren't the same Why that chapter ended on that page Why im filled with rage Why i cant erase this place. I need you here, I need you safe Talk to me please! Don't go to sleep Take me back to the snow. Please take me back to the boy you knew.
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Jan 31, 2016
Jan 31, 2016 at 6:43 PM UTC
Untitled
I'm tired from yesterday; that's all I'll say, this tired reality is more than I can take. But you and I? We could try a lie; and pretend to die, the deepest false sleep. Spend eternity counting sheep; Somewhere on the beach.
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Sep 22, 2015
Sep 22, 2015 at 1:37 PM UTC
The vague sleep
How does the wind know which way to blow? And do plants KNOW they have to grow? if they did do you think it causes them sorrow? To provide oxygen for us with each and every gust? A species with nothing but pride, greed, and lust? Knowing we're just another passing phase. (Since the planet has bad taste)
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Sep 22, 2015
Sep 22, 2015 at 1:35 PM UTC
Just a phase
It was a simply soothing sound. Seemingly surreal, severing the silence With even sin surrendering to the sublime symphony Of sirens signifying salvation. Leaving legs lying limp and lifeless, Losing a life I'd have liked to live. Leaping, laughing, or lounging lazily I fear for my future Forever fighting ferociously. Because four fearsome phantoms Brought bars, blades, and bats To beat my bewildered brother and I blind Before we both blacked out from blood loss. Now there's a knife notched in the nape of his neck. He'll never know the nuance of another night; But now I know the necessity of the nightmarish noose
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Sep 22, 2015
Sep 22, 2015 at 1:32 PM UTC
Noose
what happened? Where did it go? I had a gift to write things I didn't totally loathe. I could write about being dead or sad and it didn't totally blow.. Or I would record my ideas, and people wouldn't laugh like hyenas. I don't know what to do; I can't just get super ****** and pretend I'm Poe. I just can't write anymore, I don't know.. Please help me end this time of pain; please help me write something that isn't lame.
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Sep 22, 2015
Sep 22, 2015 at 1:27 PM UTC
Please help
I spent the majority of my time recently In the mirror. Screaming curses at myself for me to be better; because I perceive myself as minuscule and insignificant as a spec of dust on the pinhead of a needle, hurdling towards the sun. Pretty much nothing right? Yeah. But I slowly stopped hating the man in the mirror. Little by little; the days would pass, and the dim eyes of a man filled with sorrow and pain would only look back at me for a moment, before something began to stir in him. A passion began to flicker like candlelight in his pupils, and a smirk would emerge from the thought that my lips were sweetly caressed by hers in the snow and rain. So my candlelight arose to melt away the snow. Thanks to her; the man in the mirror is no longer a sad, lonesome, stranger. He's me. And we will continue to smirk and smile; and beg her to stay a little while longer. Because her lips are only intertwined with mine for a moment; but that single moment when heart and soul agree, will last me an eternity.
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Nov 25, 2014
Nov 25, 2014 at 12:05 PM UTC
reflection of a stranger
Your words crept through the night like silence urging itself to be something it's not. You whisper to yourself In the dark while you think I sleep soundly. that whisper; sweeter than a symphony moved through the air and met my ears. One barely audible "I love you" soothed every delusion of loneliness and quelled my insomnia; like a snake charmer to a hydra. It broke me down my very core and revealed a truth: you would proclaim your love for me, even if I couldn't hear you.
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Nov 25, 2014
Nov 25, 2014 at 11:47 AM UTC
Untitled
What's in a dream? is it you? or me? or who we hope to be? where's the seam? which is my reality? All I want is clarity; to know if I'll awake from despair into prosperity. To know if it's all an illusion; an allusion to confusion. Which leads me to believe; That there's nothing left to perceive, and that it's my own information i receive. That life... Is but a dream.
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Nov 14, 2014
Nov 14, 2014 at 12:12 PM UTC
Insomniac