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LouisArcher
LouisArcher
19/M/your heart Aspiring writer, I would love any critique on any of my poems!
don't fall in love with the beautiful traveler because when you do it won't even matter for when you've shared your time you'll be left, broken and shattered
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Dec 17, 2018
Dec 17, 2018 at 11:44 PM UTC
Nomads
sweet sweet serenity as the warmth from your skin travels to my own
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Nov 28, 2018
Nov 28, 2018 at 9:02 PM UTC
Serenity
I could count The stars Before I Totaled The number Of poems I will write Depicting Our love
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Nov 5, 2018
Nov 5, 2018 at 2:03 AM UTC
Countless
Sometimes as a poet It is easier to write And relate to the things that hurt Because the heart knows What it means To feel -- beautifully terrible
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Nov 2, 2018
Nov 2, 2018 at 3:40 PM UTC
Beautifully Terrible
It’s hard to find The richness In life When the richness Is as fleeting As life
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Oct 15, 2018
Oct 15, 2018 at 8:14 PM UTC
Fleeting Life
you prepare me with your words and undress me with your eyes you dismantle me with your lips and fortify me in between your thighs
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Oct 7, 2018
Oct 7, 2018 at 8:51 PM UTC
With Your _____
The world is a better place And it gets better each day As i get further from                                                                                                                                     you
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Oct 1, 2018
Oct 1, 2018 at 1:30 AM UTC
Further From............
It’s one A-M I’m waiting for you I’m tired And upset And feeling blue I wait All by myself wanting you here — Right now And nothing else But here you are! Pulling up your car Parking...Exiting And pulling me into your arms    - I’m ok
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Sep 25, 2018
Sep 25, 2018 at 3:04 AM UTC
It’s One A-M
Life exudes love’s liberty Through commitment        and liability
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Sep 23, 2018
Sep 23, 2018 at 8:26 PM UTC
Liabilerty
Honesty is the building block And never fib I try to Through life and time a ticking clock I’ll strive to trust and stand beside you When trying times come — our door they knock I’ll love and protect and make sure I find you I beg stay true — firm a rock Because I can’t again stand — being lied to
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Sep 17, 2018
Sep 17, 2018 at 8:55 PM UTC
Honesty