DeathMetal124
Hi, I'm Revan. I love poetry though I am a novice. I enjoy writing very much, but I don't consider myself to be very good at it. I love metal music and playing guitar. Other than that I'm just a schizophrenic teenager. / / In my writes I may mention specific people or events and such. If they interest you feel free to ask about them or any other interpretation of my poems as well as their inspiration.
Dear, sweet young Evelyn.
I'm sorry
But God needs you
By his throne in heaven
Your time will be short
But you'll meet your parents
Your stay won't be long
Yet filled with love of all sorts
As I have watched over
Both Mom and Dad
So must I protect you
Even if it makes them sad
I'll save you from a fallen world
From pain and hurt
You'll never know anger and hate
Wickedness, Evil or Malice
Your life
Was not without meaning
You brought back unity
To a divided family
Above you'll be kept safe
From what man will put you through
The devil's hand
Will never lay a finger on you
Once again
Sweet Evelyn
I'm sorry
But it's time to go.
Nov 14, 2014
Nov 14, 2014 at 10:59 PM UTC
Everyday
is another struggle
Everyday
is when I wish it'd end
Then I think
of my best friend
He keeps me from
ending them once and for all
Everyday
is another of loathing
Everyday
is another of despair
He not only saved my life
He made it worth living
My best friend
I truly believe loves me
Nov 6, 2014
Nov 6, 2014 at 11:13 PM UTC
In our tine of war
You seized your chance
Left me in the hands
Of our enemies
Treachery against your comrade
Turning my own on me
Leaving me for dead
I never saw it coming
When you left me
At the gates of hell
But I'll return
You can not
Simply lock me away
I'll crawl back to hunt you down
I'll find you
Rob you of your joy
Leaving my misery on your shoulders
You know I'm coming
We'll meet again
At the gates of hell
You're in ruin
Not worth a dime
Or anybody's time
No longer in power
After twenty-five years
I've paid you back
With what you deserve
I'll leave you
Just as you left me
At the gates of hell
Oct 31, 2014
Oct 31, 2014 at 8:01 PM UTC
Star light shall burn out
Darkness is everlasting
We know who will win
Oct 27, 2014
Oct 27, 2014 at 3:04 PM UTC
When I sought out vengeance
I first dug two graves
One for my dear old friend
The other was for me
Rest In Peace Anthony
Rest In Peace Louie
Here lies a liar
Here lies a misanthrope
Your grave was just like you
Shallow
My coffin buried like me
Hollow
His dagger pierced my back
In treachery
Mine went through his heart
In vengeance
May we both be judged by divinity equally
To get what we deserve
I however believe we already got it
Here on earth
Oct 22, 2014
Oct 22, 2014 at 3:04 AM UTC
Beautiful to me
Despite what others say
We were meant to be
Together we are free
Oh, how she longs for me
I for her
Our love has the power
To move heaven and earth
If only they could see
How much she means to me
Rather than giving love
They treat her with resent
Whatever comes
I will defend
No matter what they try
My love will stand
They can't stop us
Let them try
For heavy metal
I will die
Oct 21, 2014
Oct 21, 2014 at 3:46 PM UTC
Deep within my lonely self
I sit in despair
Sorrow takes charge
Serve my soul for its feast
Emptiness gathers
Like witches at the Black Mass
Casting the final curse
Of Solitude
Alone wishing someone would
Save me
Hear me
Feel me
To see if I still exist
Yet no matter how much i yearn
No one hears my plea
I am left alone
Oct 14, 2014
Oct 14, 2014 at 4:25 PM UTC
She is the wedge driven between them
She is the hollow distance within them
She is the force that drives them apart
She is a great sea that divides them
She is the thorn in their sides
She is the bullet that bursts through their flesh
She is the stake driven into their hearts
She is the salt in each of their wounds
She is the disease that rots them away
She is the deep ocean that drowns them both
She is the poison that brings agonizing death
She is the flame that devours them both
Out of the torment, what is seen?
One friend stands beside her
In love happy and healthy
As one can be
A scorched friendship
In flames of betrayal,
Oct 10, 2014
Oct 10, 2014 at 12:04 PM UTC
It's become a part of me
Always near but never seen
Born from torment
Raised on agony
Devoured my innocence
Taken my soul
The demon now has control
A new misanthropic mindset
Countless days destruction reigned
Clashing thoughts and actions
Like swords on a battlefield
I've become a puppet
No longer able to act on my own
Pulling my strings I bend to its will
Dance to his tune
Aged and tattered
It has no use for me
I look around and see nothing
Only fading memories of happiness
The smile once upon my face
Washed away by tears of sorrow
A puppet today
A puppet tomorrow
Oct 9, 2014
Oct 9, 2014 at 4:53 PM UTC