Nick Hall
Oct 31, 2012

Your poetry sucks

Intriguing the conscience, burning the desires of
Oct 2, 2013      Oct 4, 2013

The wondrous mystery clings to the wall,
Vines curling in the dimensions of darkness and dawn,
Reasons behind songs of love,
Words from the letters veiled,
The unknown story, the hidden truth,
Intriguing the conscience, burning the desires of heart.
Calling me to dance to the rhythms of silence,
To repeat the ballads not heard,
To follow the sound of green and brown,
Into the dark valley of musings.
Intriguing the conscience, flaming the desires of heart

Brendan Thomas
Brendan Thomas
Mar 22      Mar 23

Alas I've found another Muse
She knows not yet
But still it's true

For from inside
Inspiration again flows
Until that time
Like the rest she shall go

Intriguing the conscience, burning the desires ins
Oct 2, 2013

Intriguing the conscience, burning the desires inside the heart.

the reason behind the lie and the sorrow behind the words,

the warmth behind the blush and the summoning call„

the curls in the vines and the dark shadows,

the secrets and the treasure,

hell and fire,

or heaven and love,

the magic and the lullabies of night,

The righteous and the right.

Caught in the prongs of Thy,

Intrigued by the essence,

caring not to hide.

Kayla Ashleigh Gibbs
Kayla Ashleigh Gibbs
Apr 7, 2013      Apr 9, 2013

Inside my body feels like chaos.
There seems to be no sense to what is happening.
I am aware on a conscious level that something is going on inside my mind and soul,
but I cannot access it.
It's as if the things that torment me are lurking in the dark,
purposefully causing me pain,
luring me into the darkness,
tempting me with the idea that discovery is possible,
all the while knowing that they will not reveal themselves to me.
Rather they slowly seduce me into their realm of darkness
and begin to trick my mind that the darkness is the only truth that exists.

Darkness is a strange thing really.
On the surface it doesn’t seem very appealing.
It is something that holds fear and danger
and torments many people when presented in an external explicit way.
When presented in an internal way,
this fear and danger does not,
seem to send off the same kind of alarm bells that one would normally hear.
It would, in fact, appear as if the mind is somewhat
by the shadows within itself
that drift around like smoke in a breeze.
It is as if this intrigue
is enough to safeguard against the potentially sinister depths of a tormented soul.

I am not immune from this
as I too find myself perpetually drawn into the dark crevices of my mind.
I can only hope
that my fragile heart
remembers that it was not always shattered by darkness
– but rather
that it is held together by the Light that exists at the core of my divinely given being.

You are the most intriguing person I've never met
Meka Boyle
Meka Boyle
Mar 29, 2011

You are the most intriguing person I've never met
With a face like yours I don't think I could forget
You linger in my dreams, drawing me in
It's as if it's real, I can almost touch your skin
I still have yet to meet you outside of my head
Yet when I do, nothing will need to be said
For the power your words contain
Would not be able to refrain
From unleashing the feelings which run through our veins
We're bound to destroy eachother
When our paths do collide
But only in that moment will I ever feel alive
For your very existence awakens my soul
Your the missing piece which will make me whole
The faintest image of you engulfs my sight
I get through my days by thinking of the night
Where you visit my dreams if only a moment
My heart is yours yet you don't realize you own it

Daniel Magner
Daniel Magner
Oct 21, 2013

I thought
after all this time
someone would have
found me
a little

But I have been

Daniel Magner 2013
an intriguing composition filled
Pandora dO
Pandora dO
Dec 5, 2012

Music plays throughout the world,
an intriguing composition filled
with millions of different parts
spread all around the orchestral planet.

with an intriguing view to see
Kelly Rose
Kelly Rose
Dec 8, 2013      Dec 9, 2013

the textured feel of the cover
with an intriguing view to see
the soft whisper of pages turning
wondering at the mysteries that lie within

Went to the bookstore today, I love the smell, the textures, the words, the whispers of take me home
How intriguing to comprehend
Kay Baybay
Kay Baybay
Apr 11, 2013

How intriguing to comprehend
what causes the symptom of small butterflies
spinning around in dizzy circles
half asleep, lucid dreaming
dancing with smiles on their wings

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