Jade
Jade
Sep 7      Sep 7

Sometimes less is more,
When more threatens
To become too much.

#more   #overwhelmed   #less  

Everything is a mess.
I'm falling apart,
And so is she.
I feel like I can't help her
And it's killing me....

I'm overwhelmed,
Becca ODonnell
Becca ODonnell
Apr 23, 2012

I just want to let loose.

I want to scream until there's nothing left,
paint my problems on a wall,
write the words written on my heart.

I'm crying out, ready to be heard,
my mouth is moving, but I have no words.

I'm overwhelmed,
overwhelmed.

overwhelmed
laine
laine
Feb 7

kiss me harder
and we'll go down together
I swear I'm not going
anywhere
because you're exactly what I needed
and you showed up the
moment
I
looked away
I'm holding my breaths in
and imagining yours
your mouth
and everything I learn about you is a new
star
and you form constellations with ease
while I'm stuck stargazing
overwhelmed
you are composed
and I am erratic
you don't see a difference
(I wish my words were as beautiful as you)

Maria
Maria
Jul 20

Rainfall
Heavy showers
Clouds burst pouring darkness
Barren devoid desert sodden
Monsoon
Flooded rivers overflow blood
Tides roar atop drenched screams
Torrential rains
Deluge

A nine-line syllabic form with the pattern two, four, six, eight, two, eight, six, four, two.
#pain   #rain   #nightmares   #flood  
Lola Lucille
Lola Lucille
Sep 20, 2013

tilt my head back
inhale deep
I look up
at the stars
its humbling really,
just how insignificant
all our petty problems truly are
in this vast universe
exhale

SoulSurvivor
SoulSurvivor
2 days ago

Do I look together?
The picture of finesse?
I'm just a fleck of nothing.
A flit of consciousness.

I'm not all that wise
Tho I like to kid myself
I'm a bozo on the bus
Like everybody else.

Can I say that I am weak?
Hurting? Often wrong?
If I didn't have The Lord,
You know I'm not that strong.

I'm in system overload
And I'm kept awake
My life is a disaster
My sanity's at stake!

I want you all to like me
I people please, you see.
I find it very hard at times
To exhale and just be me!

Yes. Right now I'm holding breath!
I can't even wheeze,
Because I fear your judgement
I can't find release!

But I guess the truth
Is sometimes hard to find
So I'll just muddle on right here
Speechless deaf and blind

Can you all relate to this?
I tell you it's true
I'm hanging on by cobwebs...

... maybe JUST LIKE YOU.


/:-(   Catherine

Feeling insecure/overwhelmed.
You're all co kind with your
Comments, etc.
I'm on a broken down old
iPad on loan from my
Dad. Please forgive if
I'm not able to respond to
Your comments, etc.

I bit off more than I could chew
With the collections...
Please forgive me...

In the meantime I'll write...

AND PRAY!!

it wasn't a very good day,
it wasn't very bad.
but in the end
the bad starts to overwhelm.

my mind fills up
with thoughts of sadness.
i want to be happy
but i don't know how.

- a.z.

And am overwhelmed by her vulgar vocabulary.
FDW
FDW
Apr 25

I can feel the pressure building,
Each incendiary insult adding fuel to the fire of my irritation.
Climaxing within the confines of my chest.
I can no longer ignore the ills of her ignorance
And am overwhelmed by her vulgar vocabulary.
She seems to love her children,
but in this moment I just see hate.
Obviously offensive words,
Spoken with such spite
The normally sought after position of shotgun
remains unloaded.
While they crowd in the back seat.
Fed up with her furry I demand we talk for a second.
Outside the scope of eavesdropping nieces and nephews.
I ask what has happened to my soft spoken sister.
She stares into my eyes,
with tears in her own.
and I know she needs my help.

 
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