She's got a nice butt
but she's anything but nice

#love   #life   #girls   #booty  
I rebuttal

We were driving along
a dark windy road
when all of the
sudden
she said to me
“I don’t like this road
I can never see
what’s behind me”

“Why would you want to?”
I rebuttal
“You will see the headlights
behind you
and the taillights
in front of you
and if you see nothing
you are
alone”

Her face crumpled as
she turned her head
She remained silent
for a while
until her hand slowly guided
towards mine
“As if I would find
comfort in being
alone”

Karl Stewart
Dec 16, 2010

I am not bitchy all the time
sometimes I'm bright and gay
I am not always feeling down
at least not every day

Sometimes I wear a great big smile
sometimes I have a frown
sometimes I'm feeling really good
sometimes I'm really down

So if you see my smiling face
approach me if you dare
but piss me off and you will watch
as I yank off half your hair

I'll hit you like a big buzz saw
I'll chew and spit you out
so don't approach on my bad days
days when I sit and pout

I'll have to work on a happy version of this.
JM McCann
Jun 23

You see videos mean jack shit.
Videos don’t play the atmosphere in the air
tinged gently with shit from the nearby toilette
videos don’t play how it started.
They don’t hear the pounding of the dragon flies wings in the air
and the Walt Whitman you read before you arrived or
the amazing or shitty day the camera man had.
The tension of the air between two warriors as they fought
in good fun or for good riddance.
Videos do just as great a job as the person who watches
a minute of a debate and confidentially declares the winner.
Granted there is no such thing as what actually happened
everything I write beyond this is opinion declared to be fact.

Just an excerise
#video  

There ain't no such thing as a universal band-aid.
Every issue demands it's own unique solution.

my rebuttal, I want to explain
Danielle C
Danielle C
Jan 15, 2012

discussing and listening
"maybe next time, honey"

my rebuttal, I want to explain
that weeks turn to months
"no luck, no child of mine"

but instead, I reply
"it's okay, I'm not married anyway"

I'll spit out a rebuttal
Autumn Ann
Autumn Ann
Mar 9, 2014

Change my mind a trillion times
You'll never shake me

Try to kick me while I'm down
I'll rise instead

Choke me with your words
I'll spit out a rebuttal

Throw yourself in this fight
You'll never come out alive

With constant rebuttal,
Neil
Neil
Jun 18

Few people can understand the dispair of a tortured soul,
It's something deep inside, it is our demons that have control,
Fears we battle,
With constant rebuttal,

This life is turning out,
not how I planned,
I wish I was one,
who did not understand.

l, leaves a sleepless night filled with rebuttal
Jossie Villasenor
Jossie Villasenor
Feb 21, 2013

Lies, lies and lies again
From “No I swear, that wasn’t me” to you saying “She’s just a friend”
Your stupid story telling now begins
In my own eyes, your unfaithfulness I can no longer defend

From “No I swear, that wasn’t me” to you saying “She’s just a friend”
I find myself contemplating your game
In my own eyes, your unfaithfulness I can no longer defend
To love you again, I’d fall greatly to shame

I find myself contemplating your game
From mine to yours, words become babble
To love you again, I’d fall greatly to shame
In denial, leaves a sleepless night filled with rebuttal

From mine to yours, words become babble
An endless love, I refuse to begin
In denial, leaves a sleepless night filled with rebuttal
Lies, lies and lies again.

 
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