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Tobacco and You

by Palas Kumar Ray

Rays of hope, you came in my life
with you hand in hand came tobacco.
Only difference, you went too soon
Tobacco stayed to fill your absence.

Mar 4, 2010

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Palas Kumar Ray  (1963 - Present) Palas Kumar Ray is an Indian writer.

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3 written
Paul Mackenzie   Mar 8, 2010
short and so true, I hear you, nice....
Palas Kumar Ray   Mar 9, 2010
I'm very happy on your comment.Thanks a lot.
Victoria Koski   Mar 13, 2010
Story of my life. Thank-you for sharing.
Palas Kumar Ray   Mar 13, 2010
Thanks a lot.
jack spratt   Mar 14, 2010
deep words presented in simple way , not an easy task for many but you flow so well : )
Palas Kumar Ray   Mar 14, 2010
I'm so happy on your words!Thanks a lot jack.

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stayed   hope   hand   difference   soon   tobacco   rays   absence   came   life