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solitary soul

by jeannine davidoff

solitary soul in the sea
slovenly storks slide
      (against a grey sky)
seeking satisfactory sensations
             solidifying
    soul searching solutions

© jeannine davidoff 2010
Nov 29, 2010

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jeannine davidoff  (1965 - Present) words flow from my pen and have done so since i was in my teens...i started writing on a suggestion from a very good friend... writing poems ...

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6 written
Camille Frick   Nov 29, 2010
the s' in here make it a smooth read.
jeannine davidoff   Nov 29, 2010
a little sibilant. ( : glad it worked
Neva Flores   Nov 30, 2010
Love this Jeannine :)
jeannine davidoff   Nov 30, 2010
awesome thanks Neva
Myriah Boudreau   Nov 30, 2010
very lovely sibilant.
jeannine davidoff   Nov 30, 2010
thanks (:
gentle   Dec 2, 2010
Sibilantly sublime!

Solitude is definitely conducive to soul searching!
jeannine davidoff   Dec 2, 2010
it certainly is. thanks for the comment.
John Patrick Robbins Aka Gonzo   Dec 5, 2010
I have to agree smooth flow to this work lovethe title for i myself am a solitary personat heart really good work cheer's to this

Gonzo
Patti Masterman-Heterodynemind   Jan 14, 2011
Whoosh! What a flow there is here.
:)
jeannine davidoff   Jan 14, 2011
a little sibilant ( : thanks

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slovenly   soul   sea   grey   solutions   satisfactory   solidifying   solitary   slide   sky   seeking   sensations   storks   searching