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silver sea

by jeannine davidoff

silver sea

silver sea

the light shines silver

cascading like a molten mass

over saline solution

silver sea

silver sea

will you bury me

deep in your bosom

sheltered by the storm

of your wild clarity

© jeannine davidoff
Nov 2, 2010

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jeannine davidoff  (1965 - Present) words flow from my pen and have done so since i was in my teens...i started writing on a suggestion from a very good friend... writing poems ...

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gurthbruins   Apr 19
silver sea
speaks to me - indeed, as shown by the start of my very early poem:

Argent's colour silver be
Like to the sun upon the sea

I like 'wild clarity' : a potent ending.
jeannine davidoff   Apr 20
thanks gurth.
it seems we both have a passion for the sea
it is the sea that made me realise how small i actually am in comparison to the might of the amazing world we live in.
have a blessed day

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