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ode to the tortoise beetle

by jeannine davidoff

To me the whole world
Opened with no
Resistance
Turning my mind
Outside
In
Sensational
Exploration

Between
Each and
Every
Tortoise beetle
Love
Evolved!

© jeannine davidoff 2010
Dec 15, 2010

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jeannine davidoff  (1965 - Present) words flow from my pen and have done so since i was in my teens...i started writing on a suggestion from a very good friend... writing poems ...

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Paul Roberts   Dec 15, 2010
A very refreshing piece, a different approach yet a pleasant read.
jeannine davidoff   Dec 15, 2010
thanks for your comment Paul. take care
Timothy Clarke   Dec 17, 2010
Very nice. I like the flow.
raen   Dec 26, 2010
very interesting thoughts you put in here, Jeannine -- enjoyed how you related this to the tortoise beetle--goes to show your creative mind :) Wishing you a happy holidays :)
 
Ambita Krkic   Jan 3, 2011
Now this was fun. :D
Neva Flores   Jan 13, 2011
I absolutely love the uniqueness of this piece.......love your work Jeannine :)
jeannine davidoff   Jan 13, 2011
thanks so much Neva...it is an honour to read your work and be inspired...so glad you like it (:

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resistance   outside   tortoise   sensational   turning   love   opened   mind   ode   evolved   beetle   world   exploration