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i am a little bit brave

by jeannine davidoff

I am a little bit brave
and a little bit afraid
I am my goddess and my moon
I am my silver spoon
elixirs
  life potions
love potions
magic brewing
   in a pot of desire
                  to be free
                  from the constrictions
                  that used to bind me
ladidee!

© jeannine davidoff 2009
Nov 23, 2010

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jeannine davidoff  (1965 - Present) words flow from my pen and have done so since i was in my teens...i started writing on a suggestion from a very good friend... writing poems ...

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5 written
Tracey   Nov 23, 2010
Perfect!!!
jeannine davidoff   Nov 23, 2010
thanks ( :
raen   Nov 23, 2010
what an empowering write! & I loved that last line, too-- makes it sound so free! :)
jeannine davidoff   Nov 23, 2010
thanks raen glad you felt that freedom
Emily Sun   Nov 23, 2010
I would have to agree with Tracey, and any other words would be redundant.
jeannine davidoff   Nov 23, 2010
thanks emily.
Neva Flores   Nov 23, 2010
Awesome! Loved the ending!
jeannine davidoff   Nov 23, 2010
thanks Neva
Camille Frick   Nov 29, 2010
you seem to be a wonderfully happy person
jeannine davidoff   Nov 29, 2010
i think balanced is a better word. thanks

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love   magic   brave   free   constrictions   desire   pot   brewing   little   afraid   used   bind   life   potions   bit