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Her Violin Sings at Night

by Mike Winegar

She plays softly by the moonlight
In mournful solitude surrounded by mist
With the moon listening to the violin's song.
The notes caress the stars at night
As the violin sings with her tenderness.
The night carries the music along.

She comes alone at night to sit by the lake
And pour her heart into the violin's strings.
The violin's voice haunts the nighttime air.
She plays a song of longing that makes her heart break.
Her spirit weeps as her violin sings,
While into the night rises a song of despair.

The moon and the stars lend their ears
As the solitary maiden comes to play
And the mournful notes take flight.
They listen until the sun's greeting nears
And the tune finishes with the birth of the day,
But will be started anew when her violin sings at night.

Copyright 2011, William Michael Winegar
Nov 18, 2011

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Mike Winegar  (1962 - Present) I like to write because words allow a certain freedom, much like a painter's canvas or the sculptor's block. I am happily married, have several pets but ...

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11 written
Liv D   Nov 19, 2011
beautiful!
Mike Winegar   Nov 19, 2011
Thank you so much!
Folorunsho Obalugemo   Nov 19, 2011
Music, the comforter of soul. For the melody of her strings was heard in distant lands also, where mourning was turned into dancing. Yet she who played the music was sad! *A beautifully written poem!
Mike Winegar   Nov 19, 2011
Thank you for your kind review!
Alexander Rhodes Mann   Nov 19, 2011
I feel as though I know her. Well done!
Mike Winegar   Nov 20, 2011
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my poem.
Audrey Howitt   Nov 23, 2011
This is just gorgeous!
Mike Winegar   Nov 23, 2011
Thank you so much for your very kind review and compliment.
g jha   Nov 24, 2011
.     exquisite poetry ... i wish i was a violinist ... i wish i was her ...
Mike Winegar   Nov 24, 2011
Thank you for your review!  I really appreciate it!
Judy Ponceby   Nov 27, 2011
Simply lovely write.
Mike Winegar   Nov 28, 2011
Thank you very much!  I'm very happy you like it.
Frank James Davis   Dec 3, 2011
Hauntingly lovely, of both image and lyric.
High-level work, Mike!
Mike Winegar   Dec 3, 2011
Thank you!
Marieta Maglas   Dec 5, 2011
Well realized portrait,wonderful complex metaphors ,well expressed feelings,wonderful surrealistic poem,lovely rhymes.
Mike Winegar   Dec 5, 2011
Thank you so much!
Sinead Murphy   Dec 11, 2011
Great lyric poetry! reminds me of Yeats.
Mike Winegar   Dec 12, 2011
Thank you so much for your generous complement.
Elena Isabel   Feb 15
This is absolutely beautiful. Incredible imagery.
Mike Winegar   Feb 16
Thank you for reading my poem and for your kind comments.  I truly appreciate it.
Kongsaeng Chris Everson   Mar 13
Beautifully written.
Mike Winegar   Mar 14
Thank you!

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