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ek wil rus - i want to rest

by jeannine davidoff

ek is moeg
en ek will alles
uitspoeg

al die omkraplikheid
al die stres
al die frustrasie

ek wil rus
op eilande
van verwonder

sade saai
met vrede

i am tired
and i want to spit
everything out

all the discomfort
all the stress
all the frustration

i want to rest
on islands
of wonder

sow seeds
with peace

©jeannine davidoff 2011
i suddenly have a new poetic persona : ) loving it
Nov 5, 2011

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jeannine davidoff  (1965 - Present) words flow from my pen and have done so since i was in my teens...i started writing on a suggestion from a very good friend... writing poems ...

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Corinna Parr   Nov 5, 2011
This resonates. Very nicely done, Jeannine.
jeannine davidoff   Nov 6, 2011
thanks you corinna. take care jeannine
scribler   Nov 6, 2011
Thanks for that. I will have a better day.
jeannine davidoff   Nov 6, 2011
i am so glad that my poem made you feel that way.
did you?
scribler   Nov 6, 2011
Yes, a good day and a good rest. I am wondering if the writing is Dutch or Afrikaans though. I like the idea that troubles can be spat out.
jeannine davidoff   Nov 6, 2011
glad you good and rested. it is afrikaans.  yes sometimes you have to spit them out to grow!
scribler   Nov 7, 2011
jeannine; what do you make of this man?
http://www.npr.org/2011/10/30/141598329/first-listen-david-lynch-crazy-clown-time

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Words

Used in this poem
want   islands   al   stress   frustration   discomfort   rest   rus   tired   met   spit   die   vrede   ek   wil