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Drunk As Drunk

by Pablo Neruda

Drunk as drunk on turpentine
From your open kisses,
Your wet body wedged
Between my wet body and the strake
Of our boat that is made of flowers,
Feasted, we guide it - our fingers
Like tallows adorned with yellow metal -
Over the sky's hot rim,
The day's last breath in our sails.

Pinned by the sun between solstice
And equinox, drowsy and tangled together
We drifted for months and woke
With the bitter taste of land on our lips,
Eyelids all sticky, and we longed for lime
And the sound of a rope
Lowering a bucket down its well. Then,
We came by night to the Fortunate Isles,
And lay like fish
Under the net of our kisses.

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Pablo Neruda  (1904 - 1973) Pablo Neruda was the pen name and, later, legal name of the Chilean writer and politician NeftalĂ­ Ricardo Reyes Basoalto. Neruda assumed his pen name as a ...

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4 written
Marley ONeill   Feb 1, 2010
Beautiful.
KAT   Feb 17, 2010
So Sexy! The wording clashes together in the most amazingly beautiful way!
Em Masen   Mar 4, 2010
Gorgeous.
Samuel Dickinson   Sep 14, 2011
Excellent words.

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eyelids   lips   bitter   drunk   land   months   longed   sticky   wet   drifted   woke   body   kisses   taste   like