Come To Know You
by Neva FloresThrough the sphere of consciousness
I travel into your mind
Sharing your deepest feelings and beliefs
Yet not feeling less
Than if they were mine
I hear the echoes of your private pain
See visions of your pleasure
Take inside my inner self all that you are
Within your domain
We stand in equal measure
I can feel the awesome presence of your power
Know that which makes you weak
When I travel into all that you are inside
To truly come to know you
Is what I seek
Copyright *Neva Flores @2010
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Neva Flores (1966 - Present) My heart is full of love for the eyes of time. Inside I feel that I know how they hold my soul and look into my life ...
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ju Oct 4, 2010
intriguing, powerful. well sculpted angles and hard edges. beautiful.
Neva Flores Oct 4, 2010
Wow, Ju, I do believe this is one of the best reviews I have ever received and one of the best I have ever read also. Thank you so much. :)
Frank Lambert Oct 4, 2010
This is an intriguing verse, the place in which the writer travels. I really enjoyed reading this well written poem.
phil roberts Oct 4, 2010
no surprise to find another beautifully written poem, neva. cleverly constructed and full of insight. thanks.
lorilynn Oct 4, 2010
yes, you do see the visions of my pleasures and i can feel the awesomeness of your power in writing poetry. you always leave me in awe.
Cierrah Pack Oct 4, 2010
Yes we must place or imagine ourselves in someone else's shoes to share and know what they're feeling and thinking.
Neva Flores Oct 4, 2010
We do that as poets so often do we not? Thank you for the read and your comments Cierrah. :)
almaraye Oct 4, 2010
You have a power to feel, to put into words. an art that you have merveilleusement~~.Great write. Neva....
james robert Oct 4, 2010
To know , and accept, the good and the not so good. That's it isn't it?Rather than trying to find the nonexistent"perfect person! Good bit of love and wisdom here. Oh, and style!
Paul Roberts Oct 4, 2010
To be as one, a priceless gift we ask for, yet if recieved, how would we handle it? a poet will write soon of that experience I am sure. Well done my friend.
barnoahMike Oct 5, 2010
I saw you!! walking;;right toward me;;as we got closer ,a spirit moved within me ,"saying" keep walking straight;;;;I prepared for a COLLISION!! instead I found an inward Peace:: { {perhaps I should have used that for a responder,,but I was moved to comment"RIGHT-NOW".<.
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