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Coastguards save the day for The Mouse with a House on the River Louse

by jackie-mead

The Mouse with the house on the River Louse Now has a family of 12 to feed A husband and ten smaller mouths all reside with the Mouse in the house on the River Louse One day the Mouse with the house on the River Louse went outdoors to explore with the intention to find something tasty and fine to feed them all She walked to the edge of the grounds to the bank of the River Louse, where her friend the Frog, who didn't live in a house but lived on a log in the middle of a bog with his friend Bee, was waiting for his friend to serve her tea The Frog and The Bee showed the Mouse with a House on the River Louse a table set fit for a Queen with fine China cups, saucers and plates and a tablecloth made of lace The Mouse with a House on the River Louse was delighted and very excited as the Frog and The Bee said at half past three they would be joined for tea by a new neighbour Miss Molly According to the Frog and Bee Miss Molly had just moved with her dog and cat, a dog named Mouse and Ferret the Cat At half past three Miss Molly came to tea and brought with her muffins and cream The Frog and The Bee brought scones and jam and the Mouse with the house on the River Louse brought some crackers and cheese The children of the Mouse with a House on the River Louse joined their mother and Miss Molly, the Frog and The Bee the Cat named Ferret and the Dog named Mouse and quickly polished off the delicious tea The children and the cat and dog all asked if they could play in the bog, the bog where the Frog lived in the middle on a log. The Mouse with a House on the River Louse agreed and so did Miss Molly and the Frog and Bee The children, the Cat and Dog all played happily in the middle of the bog The children, the Cat and Dog found some sticks in the bottom of the bog and began to weave and make a raft, all they needed was a a Sail to catch the draft One of the children squeeked with excitement  when they found a lily pad on the ground Quickly the lily pad was hoisted atop and the raft completed and ready to sail in a hop The children, Ferret the Cat and the Dog named Mouse were playing lovely outside the house, pushing the raft up and down as not a drop of wind was to be found Then suddenly the wind changed direction and the northerly winds began to blow, they started really slow but the wind got faster and very strong The children, Cat and Dog couldn't hold on for very long and suddenly they were being taken away from their safe play, being carried down stream and they all did scream Just like that Dad came home and took out of his pocket a telephone He called the coastguard to come quick, a raft had drifted and was headed for the slip, soon they would be in the ocean with the bigger ships Aboard the raft 10 young mice, Ferret the Cat and a Dog named Mouse, all huddled together, to be less afraid, hoping someone would save the day The coast guard turned up at the house and asked to speak to the Head Mouse Mother and Father together they spoke, eager to save their children cut afloat on the boat Then at half past four came a big roar the coastguards had saved the day, the raft had been caught and brought on board just before they got to the edge of the bay and sailed away to the bigger bay The Mouse who had a House on the River Louse, Dad, Molly the Dolly and Frog and Bee all shouted ecstatically "Thank you Lord for hearing our prayers and sending the men who saved the day and rescued our children from the mouth of the bay" The Mouse who had a house on the River Louse counted the heads, toes and noses of the children to confirm they were all safe and then said their goodbyes and ushered them all safely inside
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jackie-mead
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Written by
jackie-mead
60 / F / United Kingdom
Published
Feb 6, 2018
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The 6th and possibly final chapter of the Mouse with a House on the River Louse

Once again an epic read so thank you to anyone who takes the time to read it

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