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Jan 2017
I thought of myself
As a phoenix set aflame
Now I'm just ashes
Just noticed this worked almost as well as the original structure. What do you guys think? Please read the original too, I really think it is much better. Constructive criticism and feedback is always appreciated.
T R Wingfield
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T R Wingfield  40/M/Deep in the Heart'o'Dixie
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