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When It Rain, It Pours. And When It Pours, It's Over.

by gabriel-ackerman

Do you see how blue the sky is, not a cloud around. A beautiful day, with only the calming sounds. The birds are chirping, the gently breeze flowing. The sun is shining and the grass is growing. Clouds slowly move across the expanse of blue. Casting huge shadows, sometimes over you. One rain drop falls down through the air. You feel the water on you, slowly wetting your hair. The clouds darken the suns rays as they disappear from sight. And on top of that, it is slowly becoming night. You get inside, where it is bright, dry, and warm. All of a sudden that rain becomes a storm. I pillar of wind heading your way. You know you wouldn't survive, so there is no reason to stay. You walk outside and begin to run. Getting cold once again without the light of the sun. You watch the pillar of wind rip through your home. You are stuck outside in this wasteland, forced to just roam. So you sink to the puddle forming beneath your feet. So helpless, alone, and cold you begin to weep.
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Oct 18, 2015
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I actually am pretty happy with this poem. Hope everyone enjoys.

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#suicide#broken#depression#death#alone#dead#rain#help#storm
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