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Apr 2015
Haiku #1
Spinning in darkness
Battling to gain her senses
Sips down her coffee.

-Zainab Attari
Hey guys, this is my first Haiku and I would love to get some feedback :) Thanks!
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Zainab Attari
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Zainab Attari  India
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