Sijo

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Sijo (pronounced "see-szo" or "she-szo", with the J pronounced as the French pronounce Jacques) is a Korean poetic form, which may be narrative or thematic, and takes a three line form, averaging fourteen to sixteen syllables. Sijo introduces a situation in line 1, development in line 2, and twist and conclusion in line 3. The first half of the final line employs a “twist”: a surprise of meaning, sound, or other device. Printing restrictions often cause Western sijo to be divided at the natural break and printed in 6 lines. Some translators and poets have adopted this technique, so modern sijo may appear in either 3 or 6 lines:                                                                                                                                                                                                    "Where pure snow flakes melt/ Dark clouds gather threatening/ Where are the spring flowers abloom?/ A lonely figure lost in the shadow/ of sinking sun, I have no place to go." - Yi Saek  (1328–1395)                                                                                                                                                                                                                           "The spring breeze melted snow on the hills then quickly disappeared./ I wish I could borrow it briefly to blow over my hair/ And melt away the aging frost forming now about my ears." ...U T'ak (1262-1342, author of this oldest surviving sijo)
K Balachandran
  Aug 1, 2012
K Balachandran · Aug 1, 2012

"I am impossible to please,
with poetry or anything else"
I am stunned by your beauty,
yet, flummoxed by this stubbornness.

Golden sun does caress your face,
and highlight lovely curls,
reminding me this, yet again,
nothing stays for ever.

Up the hill through a winding path,
you lead me from the front,
look out point did invite,
you didn't pay any heed.

On sundown, when we go down,
hold my hand, stand close to my side,
view those blue hills at the farthest,
you'll change and understand.

Josh Oo-Wah Coyle
  Apr 16, 2012
Josh Oo-Wah Coyle · Apr 16, 2012

A window flung open with drapes barging into the room,
The sun's smug shine tells my toes that the rest of the world is awake,
And so my eyes make their first journey into today's forever.

Matthew P Hill
  Jan 11, 2012
Matthew P Hill · Jan 11, 2012

The act I've practiced for so long, gonna make history
Standing up to the world, first step of the journey
We are both turning, but I am the only one leaving

Megan Dakota Parker
  Jan 9, 2012
Megan Dakota Parker · Jan 9, 2012

He ties me up, he strips me down until there's nothing left.
Crack the whip, draw out the blood and the sweat and the tears.
For this is what we call love; I love the way he hurts me.

Matthew P Hill
  Dec 18, 2011
Matthew P Hill · Dec 18, 2011

He walks like he has a gun   Desperado slinks urban ruins
Poise attracts attention of martial thugs   Cuffs him, pressed on hood
Living proof of happiness found  Body check, pat down, hope against pavement

tsac
  Dec 15, 2011
tsac · Dec 15, 2011

I hope when I am dead and gone     that if my life were typed
up in a Microsoft word document     that it will be found
too lengthy in pages     and to thick to drive a staple through.

12.14.11
tsac
  Dec 14, 2011
tsac · Dec 14, 2011

Out of kindness     my mother made me a simple sandwich
Looking on I said     "Careful how much peanut butter you use
the bread is wholesome goodness,     and the sweet jelly divine."

12.14.11
An allegory of a sandwich, (samsara) peanut butter (suffering), bread (life), and jelly (enligtenment). Yum.
My first attempt at sijo--comments welcome
Kongsaeng Chris Everson
  Dec 13, 2011
Kongsaeng Chris Everson · May 21, 2010

No waste here     in the office
of poetry     where we gain some

wisdom, of     course, I don't know
what that is, but     I sort of do.

When the pen     runs out of ink, fix
the thing and then     write again.

Free poem by Christopher Everson - 2010
Kongsaeng Chris Everson
  Dec 13, 2011
Kongsaeng Chris Everson · May 20, 2010

Green candle     on the altar
for the Buddha,      Dharma, Sangha

Flickering     the fire shines
golden light rays     on brown table

Candle glows     bought at hardware store
and on sale!     so that's life

Free sijo by Chris Everson - 2002   (companion poem to HEART HAIKU)
Kongsaeng Chris Everson
  Dec 13, 2011
Kongsaeng Chris Everson · May 20, 2010

Coffee stain     on a white cup
painted with black     for fine art's sake

goes walking     within my hands
to the bathroom     for a cleaning.

"Wash your cup!"     the zen master said
and the student     broke on through.

Free poem by Chris Everson - 2002
 
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