One's heart bleeds for you young sapling,here have a pheasant

One is very impressed with this,here have a knighthood,arise Sir Jack Horner

Marmaduke please behave one's self, you are meant to be the royal cat after all.One will have no choice but to set Bertie on you if your behaviour does not improve

Incredible imagery and well layed out, this is awarded the royal seal of approval

Great write, One thinks this deserved an O.B.E.

One is sending a private jet for One's bard right away

My dear child you really must visit the palace, One will have the servants prepare your quarters

Philosophical poetness presented by the biggest thinker on here, One salutes you oh bard

Stupendous!!!One thinks your brain is very intelligent, come sit by me

One is suitably turned on

A tear is running down One's face, dear jp you write so elegantly

One is suitably intrigued...

One is suitably impressed with your litery skills, now...
are you any good at fixing windows? Philip got very angry last night and threw a pepper pot threw the glass

One is proud of thr royal bard....*hic*.....how do I get to th Palace from here ?

The Queen is very impressed, keep this up and you may visit my chambers tonight

Very nice...now hand over my lovely doggies!

Very confusing but Andrew explained it, very well done young man

this is dark dark dark ,you alright?

I keep hearing this, just to clarify ..is there a sicko on this site?

I reckon it should be based on poems saved as a favourite, not on comments.Any way man, wtf is going on here, i been gone a while and i come back to a war! And i hear theres a sicko on the site.think i'll take a break and come another time

Awesome Jack ! Back with a blast!

thats disgusting, so he can spout evil about you dying and your the one that is punished.Fuck that, I'm deleting my poems and leaving Hello , absolutely ridiculous .

Yes mate its well out of order, you may not appeal to peoples nice side because of your comments but wishing you dead is sick.I saw the comment myself and was shocked to say the least.If you want backing though pal maybe be a bit kinder to folk

i bloody love little poems with massive messages, fucking nice one lady

Right with you raitch on this one, our boys deserve total respect

Lady take a bow..

Nice one lady, had me gripped

brilliant poem and read really well mate

good one mate, you delivered it brilliantly , 'ere are you and that chick Neva getting it on? she won't respond to my dinner offer, I'll step aside if you are , lol

well knock me down wiv a feather, stupendous write lady

nicely dealt with horner

mate, you have some pent up anger going on, i like it

I've got some geezers that need sortin' out you up for it jacky boy?

'ere your fucking good lady

made no sense to me but realy enjoyed it lady

lady you write real good, amazing in fact, sweet

i'll tell you what i really hate..water melons.
great poem lady,really liked it big stylee

this is gold dust , are you published?

haha she got you there Jacky boy, funny as fuck and super intelligent as well