Fuckadoodledoo!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Where in the world did the inspiration come from??? Awesome :)

God save the queen
The fascist regime
They made you a moron
Potential H-bomb

God save the queen
She ain't no human being
There is no future
In England's dreaming

Don't be told what you want
Don't be told what you need
There's no future, no future,
No future for you

God save the queen
We mean it man
We love our queen
God saves

God save the queen
'Cause tourists are money
And our figurehead
Is not what she seems

Oh God save history
God save your mad parade
Oh Lord God have mercy
All crimes are paid

When there's no future
How can there be sin
We're the flowers in the dustbin
We're the poison in your human machine
We're the future, your future

God save the queen
We mean it man
We love our queen
God saves

God save the queen
We mean it man
And there is no future
In England's dreaming

No future, no future,
No future for you
No future, no future,
No future for me

No future, no future,
No future for you
No future, no future
For you

u write like a person i know

This is treason........Beefeaters take him to the tower!

firstclassheidireallywellwrittenloveditwelldone.

found this little gem by random selection. Glad i did its very well written. Enjoyed

Ps. Did the one it was written for approve?

Love the first and last stanzas, and the journey in between is prety cool too!

Jacky boy's on a roll today!

Loved this one jack. nice and sentimental.

Fuckadoodledoo! Never visited the big apple, but you sure do paint an interesting perspective of it!

Would you like to borrow my spoke spanner?

I'm wispering my comment, hope you can hear it....
This is a loverly sweet poem that touched my heart,
I bow to you lady creator of art! :)

Quite profound mr Gonzo. This reads like a goodbye poem, hope not. stick around a little longer my friend.

Well all i can say is THANK FUCK I'M NOT YOUR DAD!!!!!!!!!!!

F*** me sideways Bathandplumbingsupplies this is some freeky shit!
I thought my latest short story was a bit weird.
This is off the scale!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Illegitimi non carborundum
x

Well i liked it!

Wow! your on fire of late.

Gosh! This a change for you.

Short!

Sweet!

Profound!

Write on Breezey :)

Tomorrow may not be such a bad day after all!.......

beautiful and touching tribute....(with moist eyes) :(

we all have bad 'periods' in our lives, but as the song say's 'Only women bleed'

Blew me away! extremly well written, was like a mini movie playing in my head!

You F***er! half the night i was stood at the back door calling in my Tibbles! Guess we can take the missing cat posters down now :(

This crys out to love lost, but also feels unfinished.
Hope love finds its way back to you.

Very interesting piece of work you have created.
Was the patten deliberate? or did you strike lucky?

Gosh this is an eye opener! Thought it was about somebody i know, but then again maybe it is.......

Please Bathtub can you point me the the direction of
THE POETIC LIBERTY ACT 2010 so i can read the whole thing. Thank you.

Have to agree, there is something special about a hand written letter that an e mail or text just cannot compete with.

Are you still holding a spanner?
You made my nuts tighten!!!

Its back and its still your best write.
In my humble opinon.

Another internet scam?

I'am still waiting for my Nigerian lottery winnings to come through!!!

My favorite Robert Service poem

well said ;)

'Someone had blunder'd:
Theirs not to make reply,
Theirs not to reason why,
Theirs but to do and die:
Into the valley of Death
Rode the six hundred.'

Onwards and upwards dear poetess!

Is this the Artist formaly know as Raitch?