interesting tactic of advertising this poem i must say

quite a story
quite a song

you bring these unfamilar worlds into a dawn

how very nice

well put it unfolds the perfectly perserved messaged very gracefully

beauteous

classy so very perfect and just illustrates such an idea ... such an idea makes you smile

classy so very perfect and just illustrates such an idea ... such an idea makes you smile

like this very much i do its absolutly memorizing so captivating

is this not a metaphor?

it flows with a melody

witty it may be poetic it is not

poetic and simple

simply poetic

very very keen peachy keen

to the world unseen

a story

a ride

across the tide

bringing us to the other side

which is hell

haha oh hho ho very pleasant

eh good ... eh

nah

it kinda sounds a bit familiar especially the beginning about a canvas hmm yeah familiar

holy wholey shit you blew me away

its a great idea to start your story but it doesnt seem full to the end or really full at any part it definitely is a great idea for a potential mind blowing poem

the feeling is so true very poetic

eh i can see where your going with this but still i say eh

yep

ha! good one
funny

this is very very very shy of at all being shakespearish
naive

tis truth you have no idea how much you just put my thoughts to song just now

freaky

honest to all tis truth

tis truth

women power to put to music

i like it

yep thats tis correct excellent very well you really captured her story in a most poetic song of "yes thats how it was thats how it is"