I like this title, and the tempo of flow in it's read.

Seeing the realization in ones mind and sharing it to help others see is an awesome message.

Wonderful words of meaning.

The anxiety is killing me!
nice share and wording in your read.

Once the vision turns to dust, then is swept away by the lightest of breeze. Very familuar scenario.

This is freaken awesome Sender!!
Intense imagery and deep wording!
I dig this one alot!

Pure Poetry! No Comment Needed. Lol.

Intense look into our fears and confronting them just as well.

I love theae words, true freedom and reconstruction of ones self Sender. Say goodbye to the old and to the past and look out for the new and revamped inner self. great read again my friend.

Sender, you give your readers a great narrative read here. I really enjoy this free form style of writting.

This is a solid hard punch with alot of attitude. Showing a more real side in poetry. A fantastic story.

Great visual realistic write Sean. Your first line really captures the intensity you deliver.

Sean, this is a great write and true look at being real not to show any greed.

Touching poem, Love its tones and feel.