I like your poem

Somebody is having a go at the Generics style!

I like it :)

Blinking awesome!

All the things that have gone on have been very upsetting for a lot of people in this community.

I hope it will blow over so i can find the will to write!

Stay strong ;)

Your welcome to store them in my love cupboard.

Promise to treat them nice.

Hi Raitch x

Well worth reading all parts! Very good.

Really really enjoyed reading this so far. Cannot wait for more. Only hope more readers will discover your tallent.

Regards GLP.

Whooah!!!! Gabs has moved over to the dark side.
Stop listening to MM before bed & you'll avoid these nightmares lol.

In support of JPR AKA Gonzo?

Sounds like our jack fancies himself as a Country Blues balladeer!
Very nice my friend. I aprove wholeheartedly.

For everything else there's 'Master Card'

profound!

wow!

This is truly a work of genius! The thought that has gone into this is remarkable. This captures one of the all time great filmatic love stories to emerge from popular culture in the last century!
The way the diologue flows between our two characters depicts the angst felt by many lovers through the years! One for the favorites box. To be enjoyed time and time again.

Good message, poetess.

Pass it this way man don't be a 'Bogart' !!!!

I have no clue to what this is!

A sad tale well told.

Neva. I adore the easy flow to this beautiful romantic little love poem.
Only wish it was about me.

'I think I’ll sleep and dream of you'

Tomorrow never comes. Seize the day.

Thank you Thomas, I enjoyed class today, it was a good lesson.

Tick Tick BOOM!!! Yeah yeah yeah, explosive stuff!

£55.00 +VAT !! Should have been no charge you dirty Dawg!

Not a great fan of self harm myself. But I do understand the need of those who do to release the demons inside.

Quite profound!

Race's along at breakneck speed!
Good strong write.

You sir are the most amusing writer I have come across on HP. keep em spewing!

You have the gift.

Your town has never had this affect on me, I quite like it ;-)

It is amazing how much we all take for granted in our busy and at times selfish lives, are own preocupations are often foremost in our minds. So we miss the people in the shadows, who have been dealt one of lifes bad hands. If only more of us took time out to look around us, to see whats going on in our community. Then just maybe we may start to rebuild some of that much missed village spirit we all once enjoyed.

Let us all see the light!

"I'm talking to the man in the mirror"

I'd forgotten about this one, funny man

Yer bastards you struck Gold Again!!!!!!!!