every estate sale i've ever been to has felt this way. it's heartbreaking to see the accumulations of someone's life collected and auctioned off to the highest bidder with no regard to the meaning it might have had to those departed, and you beautifully articulated the feeling.

a little afternoon fun in the warm sun... a great expression of the little intimate games we all love to play on lazy weekends. cute yet spunky and seductive.

i hate being asked what i'm thinking about because i can never think of a reply, but this poem feels like a perfect answer. it's simple, wistful, and touching. great read.

simple and elegant, with a great metaphor that is accessible enough for others to appreciate. i loved it.

this is gorgeous. i find it difficult to convey so much emotion and feeling in haikus, but you seem to have hit the mark with this one. i felt chills. great job (:

amazing. you perfectly captured the feeling of loss, recollections of trivial memories that you never realized would mean so much to you until the person you made them with was gone. this made my heart ache.

this is great. it totally captures the moment when a person realizes that although they are the center of their own universe, most everyone else doesn't even realize they exist. beautiful job.

"you'd think that i'd like you more
with all the love that we make" -

absolutely perfect line in a damn good poem. this poem captures every feeling of this specific situation (a familiar one to me- haha). great job. (:

i absolutely love the first verse-
Liar, liar
your mouth
is on fire

beautiful image, perfect arrangement of the words, captures the feeling of this poem perfectly. i love it.

beautiful. i loved the contrast of the last two verses (and the line about fish) (:

very intense, very creepy, and very well done. i liked it (:

i love the rich, extravagant language and imagery. very melodramatic, very intense. overall i really like this poem.