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another ex-memberHello Poetry - What A Joke by vanished  May 23, 2011
This site used to be my home until mein fuhrer fucked it all up, such a waste of a good site
another ex-memberThe Queen And I by vanished  Dec 7, 2010
My heart bleeds for you Marmaduke, just hang on in there, funy write!
another ex-memberSeasons. by jp christiansen  Dec 6, 2010
fantastic comparision , if i could choose a season to be in I'd choose Spring
another ex-memberIncidental Fate. by jp christiansen  Dec 6, 2010
clever munchkin : )
another ex-memberThe Blessing. by jp christiansen  Dec 6, 2010
this reminded me very much of classic poetry , written beautifully my friend ,you never fail to deliver and always get my brain ticking over.Thankyou for being here
another ex-memberAt The Inn. by jp christiansen  Dec 6, 2010
you clever rabbit!
another ex-memberUnknown Lover. by jp christiansen  Dec 4, 2010
sometimes the unknown can be more alluring than the known, a little bit of mystery keeps the heart in check
another ex-memberI Can’t Find The Words. by jp christiansen  Dec 4, 2010
I often wish to write about world events and the like but don't feel I can articulate it as well as it deserves . obviously you would not have that problem : )
another ex-memberHurting Beauty. by jp christiansen  Dec 4, 2010
ooh yea! crank it up
another ex-memberPossession. by jp christiansen  Dec 4, 2010
I sometimes wonder if my poet is actually me and the human who resides with me is actually not real, either way I know where I'm happiest
another ex-memberThe Sound Of Bones. by jp christiansen  Dec 4, 2010
you always leave one with something to think about, sterling work jp
another ex-memberIn A Desert Tent. by jp christiansen  Dec 4, 2010
woweeee jp loved it,what a mystery ,a previous life is emerging , you must do a follow on ,this is good shit
another ex-memberThe Blue China Cup by vanished  Dec 2, 2010
Your best poem yet methinks : )
another ex-memberher name is... (Repost) by Helen  Dec 2, 2010
have you got her number? she sounds very nice and easy going : )

( plus she has cash )
another ex-memberOne Writes. by jp christiansen  Dec 2, 2010
lovely words jp
another ex-memberMother by vanished  Dec 1, 2010
I take it they didn't get on then?
another ex-memberrainbow by vanished  Dec 1, 2010
sounds rite nice that does, you pictured it very well : )
another ex-memberRevelation. by jp christiansen  Nov 29, 2010
JP lets just say I'm a fan and love your work..
why? because you dig deep into the mind's workings and phrase your write with unquestionable panache,
doffed
another ex-memberLone Survivors. by jp christiansen  Nov 27, 2010
so eloquently put,are you casanova reincarnated? hehe I'm the Marquis DeSade
another ex-memberHuman Triptych. by jp christiansen  Nov 27, 2010
strong write which yet again shows what a clever soldier you are jp! : )) hope you well pal
another ex-memberFree Swimming by vanished  Nov 21, 2010
just about as perfect as perfect an be
another ex-memberLilies by vanished  Nov 21, 2010
nice scene setting leaving us perusing over what happened and why
another ex-memberCracked. by jp christiansen  Nov 9, 2010
you wanna come inside my head? My thought patterns are definatley looking for the coordinates of truth an what with the excessiebouncing they process in a fractured manner. PL you are a legend
another ex-memberDwelling In The World. by jp christiansen  Nov 9, 2010
hmmm...I think you know I relate, put perfectly my friend
another ex-memberDown And Out. by jp christiansen  Nov 9, 2010
PL this is in a sense beautiful,yet also sad and also with a hint of dark humour .Loved it
another ex-memberGoodbye note by Helen  Nov 9, 2010
WAHEYYYY!!! ten out of ten!!!!
another ex-memberIn the dark room by ---  Nov 8, 2010
haha ...now this...I like!
another ex-memberWHEN IT'S TIME by <unnamed>  Nov 8, 2010
' dragging my heart behind '

love this line

another ex-memberBreak Down The Barricades. by jp christiansen  Nov 7, 2010
Hear! Hear! I admire anyone who thinks outside the box
another ex-memberCool Indifference. by jp christiansen  Nov 7, 2010
PL I am a loving your work
another ex-memberIn The Dominion Of Ignorance. by jp christiansen  Nov 7, 2010
knocking 'em out da park again PL
another ex-memberI Came This Way, Once. by jp christiansen  Nov 7, 2010
What time is it?
Now
Where are we?
Here
nuff said
another ex-memberBlack. by jp christiansen  Nov 7, 2010
very interesting PL
another ex-memberWHERE I WAS BROUGHT UP by <unnamed>  Nov 6, 2010
haha nice final line!
another ex-memberLaszlo by Anna  Nov 5, 2010
crikey!
another ex-memberOLD MAN WAITING by <unnamed>  Nov 5, 2010
you forgot the dooobie hanging out his mouth!
I can only dream of writing descriptions of imagery like this,Phil you're a star
another ex-memberAfter by Gabrielle Hamberger  Nov 5, 2010
direct and to the point, bang on
another ex-memberONCE AGAIN THE NIGHT by <unnamed>  Nov 4, 2010
I think Phil needs a smoke !
another ex-memberArtistry Supreme. by jp christiansen  Nov 4, 2010
You are a philosopher of poetry dear boy , i am enjoying your insights
 
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