This is such a great poem, on all fronts. So well done.

'Untouchable in love
Starlit beaching
On the stagnant ripples of broken speech
She speaks,
In things,
That don't matter;' <- Most excellent.

Beautiful. Love yer opening line especially. Excellent verse. As always ;)

'and i wonder if you feel
when i breathe soundless dreams' <- Love this part. What an incredibly beautiful verse.
'until then i'll be
as unfallen snow
in the stillness of winter sky' <- Perfect.

;)

Love the concept. Its complexity only to be outdone by its simplicity. Surely, a funeral of this sort is where soft words may only be spoken.

Always such a curious one; you.

Beautiful poetess, exquisite as always.

Excellent and endearing. Vetty cool.

I like yer suspended shroud of antiquity, you know, veiling the secret of ages like it does, aye, 'tis cool a turning of phrase. 'Tis a cool poem too.
Keep well

I like tater tots.

Why you always gotta write such cool poems for; huh?

Love yer ending here, quite keen ;)

;) Mr. Mann, nice edge you got here. Very cool poem.

Sleep cures everything. Always a blessing. Cool poem, felt yer opening stanza especially. lol

Hehe, that made me smile. Jolly cool poem Mr. Durbin.

Very cool.